We had an AI computer write a 5000 character personal statement. Do you think it would help get an interview?

CHATGPT is an AI bot that generates text based on inputs. There have been a few trends lately to test the bot’s capabilities. We figured: why not try and see if this bot could help us get into PA school? Below is the essay it generated based on the following input: “Write a personal statement for PA school with a 5000 character limit”:


As a child, I always had a fascination with the human body and how it worked. This curiosity led me to pursue a degree in biology, and during my studies, I discovered a passion for healthcare. I volunteered at local clinics and hospitals, and through these experiences, I was inspired to become a physician assistant.

I have always been drawn to the idea of being able to directly impact and improve people's lives, and I believe that a career as a physician assistant will allow me to do just that. I am excited to learn from and work alongside physicians, and to use my knowledge and skills to provide the highest level of care to my patients.

Throughout my academic and professional experiences, I have developed strong communication skills and a commitment to teamwork. I understand the importance of collaborating with other healthcare professionals to provide the best possible care for my patients. I am also highly organized and detail-oriented, which I believe are essential qualities for a physician assistant.

I am confident that my passion, dedication, and skills make me an ideal candidate for physician assistant school. I am excited to continue my education and begin my career as a physician assistant, where I can make a meaningful impact on the lives of others.


Obviously this is not 5000 characters. The CHATGPT bot created this “essay” which rounds out around 1276 characters. That is NOT sufficient for a personal statement that one would submit to CASPA!

So we tried again to see what it would come up with. Below is the second attempt:

As a child, I was constantly amazed by the dedication and skill of the physicians who cared for my family and me. As I grew older and began to consider my own career path, I knew that I wanted to dedicate my life to serving others in the same way.

After completing my undergraduate degree in biology, I spent several years working as a medical scribe and shadowing a variety of healthcare providers. These experiences solidified my desire to become a physician assistant and allowed me to gain a deeper understanding of the vital role that PAs play in the healthcare team.

I am now excited to take the next step in my journey and apply to PA school. I am confident that my strong academic background, healthcare experience, and compassionate nature make me an ideal candidate for this program.

I am particularly drawn to the PA profession because of the opportunity it provides to work closely with patients and have a direct impact on their health and well-being. I am a strong believer in the importance of building relationships with patients and providing them with the support and education they need to take an active role in their own healthcare.

I am also excited about the versatility and flexibility of the PA profession. I am eager to explore a wide range of medical specialties and work in a variety of settings, including rural and underserved areas.

I am highly motivated and committed to working hard to succeed in the PA program and become a valuable member of the healthcare team. I am confident that my passion for medicine and desire to help others will make me an excellent physician assistant. Thank you for considering my application.


Clearly the AI bot prioritizes it’s dedication/fascination with healthcare as a child. While this essay has the bones of a strong essay, clearly more is needed to convince someone that this bot deserves to be in PA school. Missing are personal experiences that help show what the bot learned and why they feel like the PA profession is the ONLY career they wish to pursue.

What do you think? Do you think the CHATGPT bot would help us get into a physician assistant program?